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Sail with me, eh? by WarriorCheetah
Sail with me, eh?
Good ole' captain Matthias BlueGill. 

Just a lil' sketchy in-my-comic-style action shot of Blue I did for fun.  There are a lot of problems with it, and I see many things that would have made this better, but overall I'm very proud of it anyway :D.  Like I said, it was just for fun :D.

I'm liking the colors of the wave, and of course, I had to add the kraken peeking over the side of Blue's ship.

God I never draw his hair just straight.  I know it's just a, long, slimy, rat-tail rope braid but I feel like it's got so much personality anyway XD

I can just hear him saying "Sail with me, eh? Unless a'course you wanna live a while."

And of course, the trademark bottle of booze in his middle finger raised hand :D

Captain Bluegill, as always, belongs to me. 
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Bluegill's expression sheet by WarriorCheetah
Bluegill's expression sheet
(Ugh, someday I'll fix those that my scanner has blurred to hell) =n=

So here's a couple sketches of Bluegill's emotions. 

I tried to do his primary ones, his top ten and then some, and I will say, this totally helps with character drawing skill, and I had a lot of fun doing it :D

Especially the middle one and all of his tattoos :D

The quotes on his arms read "He that will learn to pray, let he go to sea." ~ George Herbet 
and "A lot of people attack the sea I make love to it." ~ Jacques Yves Cousteau
the script underneath the heart on his arm says "Married to the sea." 
He has others but I haven't decided what they are yet.

I had too much fun with this 
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Bleeding death by WarriorCheetah
Bleeding death
I may add to this a bit more later on.

But I mainly just did this for fun in the morning to get "them creative juices flowing." :D

took me about an hour and a half overall 

Bear skulls are pretty easy to draw in my opinion. (Though I used this amazing piece as a reference XD warriorcheetah.deviantart.com/…)

This piece was a blast :D Expect more horror related stuff later on. 

(Mediums used, inkpen and watercolor 
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Holepunch's Mary Sue Litmus Test:

Ah, the Mary Sue. We can't cobble together a truly comprehensive description of what they are, exactly, but we can agree on one thing: an annoying, 'perfect' character who, through a general lack of flaws and character development, is excruciating to sit through and often makes us gnash our teeth, tear our hair, and reach for the back button. This nefarious creature can be measured and detected, so let's all grab our magnifying glasses and get classifying.

This is a subjective subject; a trait that drives one person right up the wall might fail to get any reaction from another. As you go through the list, count up the points. Each trait will register from 1-5 points, with 1 being a mild thing and 5 being a serious infraction. If a trait is not addressed at all in the story the character comes from, or is totally unknown, just ignore it. And don't worry about racking up points—the de-Suifier part of the test ought to restore some balance to the character (if they've got any) by taking away a few points.

This test is divided into three parts: 
1) General traits—applicable to all characters.
2) Fanfic characters' section. (for fandoms with an expanded universe, run the characters through this section as well—it's still fan work.)
3) Flaws and de-Suifiers—something to soften the blow.

Point Ratings:
0-15: Doing fine; this character is balanced and believable, without any/many overwhelming Sue qualities. Good job!
15-25: This character is acceptable, but not humble.
25-40: Getting into Sue territory; you might want to go over the character again.
40-50: It would be a good idea at this stage to seriously reconsider this character, as they can qualify for a Mary Sue.
50+: You've got a Sue on your hands. I recommend killing it with fire.
80+: What the hell are you thinking!?

Example Scores:
Colonel Hans Landa (Inglourious Basterds): 10
Edward Cullen (Twilight): 92
Granny Weatherwax (Discworld): 10
Artemis Entreri (Forgotten Realms): 53
Riddick (Pitch Black, Chronicles of Riddick): 23

Remember, just because a character gets points for something doesn't mean that they're a Sue. It's when the points start to pile up that the trouble begins. Even if ones are innocuous, too many and you might have a problem on your hands...

Section I: General Traits

1) The character's name, is it... (1 point each)
a) An unusual name for the character's locale/culture/race/time? (ex. Sakura or Hiromi for a non-Japanese, an English medieval peasant 
b) A more ordinary name, spelled differently so that it's more unusual?
d) A nickname that was chosen because it sounded cool? (ex. Raven, the Jackal)
e) A New Age, gothic, or just darn whimsical name? (ex. Moonlight Raven Winterschild, Ebony Tamora Eclipse, Lady Amelia Dianne Clark the Third, etc.)
f) The name of a god, goddess, or mythical hero? (ex. Ares, Juno, Isis.)
g) Obviously the name of a historical figure? (ex. Bonaparte, Cleopatra, Diogenes. Common names like William don't count.)
h) Something just 'perfect' for them? (ex. Jade, for an aloof or cool character.)
Ainger: + 1
Freeman: +1
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: (Mathias Bluegill) +3
Flint: + 2
Loraine: +1
3) Is the character exceptionally beautiful or handsome? (2 points.) Or are they merely pretty or good-looking, but not striking? (1 point.)
...Is their beauty frequently described (or remarked upon by others)? (2 more points.)
...By characters who don't normally do that sort of thing? (2 more points.)
...Are they described in poetic terms or purple prose? (1 more point.)
...IN DIALOGUE!? (3 more points.)
...Do they still look good even when they should not be, such as after being tortured, wounded, badly sick, in battle, etc?) (2 more points.)
Ainger: + 1
Freeman: +1
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: (Mathias Bluegill) +3
Flint: + 6
Loraine: +5

4) Do other characters fight over the character because of their good looks? (2 points.)
...Is anybody envious of or feels threatened by their beauty? (1 point.)
Nope

5) Conversely, is it emphasized that that character is not beautiful or attractive, despite evidence to the contrary, such as a great number of other characters falling in love with/lusting after them? (3 points.)
Nope

6) If male, is that character a chick magnet? If female, do all the guys want her? (3 points.)
...Does this charm defy sexual orientation? (4 points.)
Nope

7) About the character's charisma, are they able to make friends/allies easily? (1 point.)
...Even with otherwise unfriendly characters? (1 more point.)
...Can they regularly convert enemies to allies with their charm? (3 points.)
...Do other characters automatically trust them? (2 points.)
...Even characters that are of a suspicious/untrusting mindset? (4 points.)
...Are they good at talking someone into doing what they want or giving out information? (1 point.)
Ainger: + 1
Freeman: +2
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: +3
Flint: + 17 (flint I'm so sorry)
Loraine: +5

8) Does the character have a great physique, which is shown or described in loving or drooling detail? (2 points.)
...Does it defy their eating/exercise habits? (3 points.)
...Are their proportions impossible or extremely difficult to achieve? (ex. A D-cup on a 28-inch bust, a 6'1 girl weighing 100 pounds but not anorexic, etc.) (5 points.)
Nope

9) Looks aside, is the character in the pink of health despite detrimental habits? (ex. a chain-smoker with healthy lungs, very heavy drinker with healthy liver and skin, etc.) (5 points.)
NOT AT ALL

10) Back to looks, does the character have any of the following? (1 point each.)
a) An unusual eye colour for their race/species? (ex. purple, blue if Asian, yellow)
b) A distinctive or unusual birthmark, especially if it's noticeable?
c) Eyes with any other odd characteristics, such as vertically slit pupils or mismatched colours?
d) Colour-changing eyes? (3 points.)
e) Mood-ring eyes? (5 points.)
f) An unusual hair colour for their race/species/animation? (ignore if it's dyed. 3 points if it's natural.)
g) Multicoloured hair? (5 points if it's natural.)
h) Cool tattoos? 
Ainger: + 2 (Black eyes, though that's normal for a freak 
Freeman: +3 (cool tattoos XD
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: +4 (cool tattoos XD
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +5

11) Does the character have a scar that does not actually detract from their appearance, but makes them look cool? (1 point.)
...Is this scar in an odd shape for which there's no real accounting? (3 points.)

Nope they're all pretty ugly (Except Flint and Loraine

12) Does this character get a disproportionate amount of description or screen time compared to the other characters? (2 points—ignore if they're the main character.)

Nope

13) Does the character smell really good—and it's not their perfume, shampoo, or soap? (1 point.)

Wat

14) About the character's clothing... (1 point each.)
...Was it chosen to make them look extremely cool? (bonus point if it involves a lot of black, leather, high-heeled boots, or a trench coat. Or, god help you, all of the above.)
...Is it very expensive and/or cool/trendy?
...Is it very impractical or inappropriate for the character's setting or profession, but nonetheless looks good? (ex. high heels on a soldier's combat boots, a miniskirt on a nun, etc?) (4 points.)
...Are there weapons stashed in there?

Ainger: + 4 
Freeman: +3 
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: +4 
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +5

15) Can the character get away scot-free with being openly disrespectful or insubordinate toward authority figures and/or superior officers? (3 points for limited occasions, 5 points if it's regularly.)

Ainger: + 4 
Freeman: +3 
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: +5 (He does this, but he DOES NOT get away scott free.  I'll add one point.
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +5

16) Is the character always 'right?' (2 points.)
...And do they regularly prove other characters 'wrong?' (2 more points.)
...Are the other characters cowed by this one's greatness and authority, and agree to do, think, or believe things the character's way, even if they were firm about their beliefs and habits before? (4 points.)

Nope

17) If anyone disagrees with or dislikes the character, are they stupid, nasty, jealous, just plain wrong, or evil to 'justify' their dislike of the character? (5 points.)

Not at all.  Most of them are supposed to be hated.

18) Is the character socially popular? (1 point.)

This is an apocalypse :stare:

19) If the character has an attitude, temper, or spitfire personality, are the tongue-lashings they dole out to other characters 'justified?' (2 points.)

Ainger: + 4 (not at all XD
Freeman: +3 
Syd: + 1 (Nope XD
Bluegill: +5 (nope XD
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +5

20) If the character's in trouble, is there always someone there to bail their ass out of the fire? (2 points.)

Nope

21) Is the character always punished more harshly than is normal for the infraction they've committed? (2 points.)
...Or do they always get off easy? (4 points.)

:stare: Not at all

22) Does the character always have money for whatever they might want? (1 point.)
...Even if they have no day job or source of income? (2 more points.)
...Are they fabulously wealthy, heir to a large fortune, or just provided for? (3 points.)

They don't even have...*sigh*

23) About the character's past, were they...
a) Tortured? (2 points.)
b) Orphaned? (2 points.)
c) Abandoned? (2 points.)
d) Enslaved? (2 points.)
e) Abused? (3 points.)
f) The only survivor of some disaster/genocide/etc? (3 points.)
g) Raped? (4 points.)

Ainger: + 6 
Freeman: +12  (I like torturing freeman, kay? XD
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: +5 
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +9

24) Is their whole family dead? (2 points)
...Did the family die/be killed in front of them? (4 points.)
Ainger: + 7 (I'll add one because we don't know
Freeman: +14  
Syd: + 3
Bluegill: +7
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +10 (I'll add one because we don't know (loraine is Ainger's sister.

25) Is this character meant to be an ideal? (ex. If male, is he a paragon of rugged masculinity and an inspiration to all? If female, is she all sweetness and purity, or else a tough independent warrior woman?) (3 points.)
Ainger: + 10 (Tough independent warrior woman XD
Freeman: +14  
Syd: + 3
Bluegill: +7
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +10 

26) Is the character unusually and improbably advanced for their age/social status/whatever? (ex. the 15-year old general of an army, the 12-year-old going to university). (5 points.)

Nope

27) Are they very accomplished? (2 points.)
...Are they remarkably accomplished in more than 1 area? (3 points for each.)
Ainger: + 10
Freeman: +14  
Syd: + 5 (second in command? XD
Bluegill: +7
Flint: + 17 
Loraine: +10 

28) Is the character the youngest ever to attend an academy/join an organization/attain a rank/etc? (5 points.)
...What about the only woman (or man, in a female-dominated field/society) to do that in known history? (4 points.)

Nope

29) Is the character the best or among the very best at something they do? (3 points for each thing.)
Ainger: + 16 (Healing, fighting XD
Freeman: +14  
Syd: + 8 (Fighting XD 
Bluegill: +7
Flint: + 20 (Leading XD
Loraine: +10 

30) Are even the most cynical, anal-retentive, exacting, or fussy characters awed or impressed by this character's skills? (4 points.)

Nope

31) Everybody loves music! Does the character... (1 point each.)
...Have a lovely singing voice?
...Play a musical instrument? (1 point for each instrument.)
...Can they play by ear?
...Can they make anyone cry with how beautiful their singing/playing is?
...Have an especially pleasant/sexy speaking voice?
Ainger: + 17 (Though it's not mentioned in the story, Ainger's grandfather taught her to play guitar
Freeman: +15 (All the slaves played music  
Syd: + 8 
Bluegill: +8 (Actually plays violin XD
Flint: + 21 (Guitar XD
Loraine: +10 
32) Sprechen Sie Deutsch? Speaking of which, does the character fluently speak any languages apart from their native tongue? (1 point for each.)
...Do they have a gigantic vocabulary in some language, whether it's their native one or not? (1 point.)
...And does it exceed their age and/or educational level? (2 points.)

Nope

33) When the character does something, do they always succeed? (5 points.)

NOPE

34) Are the character's parents/guardians unduly restrictive or demanding? (1 point.)
...Or do they just let their kid run amok? (2 points.)
NOPE

35) Is the character undeservingly outcast or despised by people? (2 points.)
...Is it because of their talent, their powers, or their intellect? (4 points.)
...Is it because of their beauty? (5 points.)
Ainger: + 19 (outcast
Freeman: +15 
Syd: + 8 
Bluegill: +8 
Flint: + 21 
Loraine: +10 

36) Do they have a tormented, angst-ridden past? (3 points.)
Ainger: + 22 (They ALL do.  They live in a fucking apocalypse.
Freeman: +18
Syd: + 11
Bluegill: +11
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +10 (Except my sheltered baby 

37) Is the character very intelligent? (1 point.)
...Do they have very good intuition? (1 point.)
...Are they a genius? (3 points.)
...Do they have an IQ of 6420340? (5 points, and learn how IQ tests work, please.)

Meh

38) Do they have a wide variety of talents? Are they a renaissance man/woman? (ex. cooking, mechanics, carpentry, driving, botany, etc.) (3 points.)

Ainger: + 22
Freeman: +19 (can making fire with sticks count? XD
Syd: + 11
Bluegill: +11
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +10 (Except my sheltered baby 

39) Is the character a very good mimic for ordinary (non-magical) skills? (ex. they can emulate accents, dances, etiquette, etc, by observation) (2 points.)

Nope

40) Do they have a great memory? (1 point.)
...Is it photographic or eidetic? (3 points.)

Nah

41) Is the character's appearance unsuited to the time or place? (ex. a cavewoman with shaved legs, somebody wearing bifocals in the historical Middle Ages, etc.) (4 points.)

Noppeeee

42) Is the character related to royalty or nobility? (2 points.)

Not at all

43) Are they particularly well-travelled? That is, greater than the norm for their surroundings? (1 point.)
...How about in a time/place where travel was not extensive? (1 more point.)
Ainger: + 22
Freeman: +19 
Syd: + 11
Bluegill: +13 (Sailor 
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +10 

44) Are the character's flaws limited to small, insignificant ones that won't do any harm, or even endear them, such as adorable clumsiness? (3 points.)
...Are they mentioned, but never see use in-story? (Informed flaws.) (5 points.)

Nope

45) Does this character obviously get preferential treatment over the other characters—that is, do they get to take all the nicest presents? (ex. If a special or helpful item is found, this character gets it. If someone is to have a great bit of dialogue or action scene, it's this character, and so on and so forth) (5 points.)

Nope.

46) Is the character able to make accurate snap judgements of other characters? (3 points)
...Are they always right? (5 points, and go soak your head.)

Ainger: + 22
Freeman: +19 
Syd: + 11
Bluegill: +13 
Flint: + 27 
Loraine: +10

47) Is the character able to get away with just about everything they do, no matter how insolent/nasty/destructive/obnoxious/etc, without invoking karmic backlash of some sort? (5 points.)

Nope

48) Does the character have a familiar or an animal companion? (1 point.)
...Is it something "cool," like a wolf? (1 more point)
...Is it a magical creature or a demon? (1 more point.)
...What about something major, powerful, or large, like a gryphon or a dragon? (2 more points.)


Ainger: + 23 (She has pet dogs, but they kinda die right away 
Freeman: +19 
Syd: + 11
Bluegill: +13 
Flint: + 27 
Loraine: +10

49) Does the character have any special/magical items that make the going easier on them? (ex. an enchanted sword, a glowing crystal ball to light the way, a bag of holding.) (2 points per item.)

Nope

50) Is the character the most powerful mage in the world? (5 points.)
...Or are they just a very skilled or powerful one? (3 points.)
...Or are they just your average mage? (1 point.)

Nope

51) Does the character practice a type of magic that is not usual for their sex/social standing/training level/whatever restrictions apply? (3 points.)

No magic bruh

52) Is the character an alien, or something else not human? (1 point.)
...Are they of a 'superior' species? (3 points.)
...Are they a hybrid of some sort? (1 more point.)
...What about if hybrids are really rare or generally impossible in their canon/setting? (5 points.)

Ainger: + 33 (shiet 
Freeman: +19 
Syd: + 11
Bluegill: +13 
Flint: + 27 
Loraine: +10

53) Is the character possessed of any cybernetics that enhance their natural abilities or give them new ones? (ex. infrared, super strength, ability to hack computers with their MIND) (1 point per enhancement.)
...If not cybernetics, is the character possessed of super-powers that give them these traits? (2 points per ability.)

Nope

54) If the character is a vampire, do they sparkle? (If they do, stop taking this test immediately and learn the bloody folklore. If you insist on continuing, take 15 points.)
...Or are they just an ordinary vampire? (2 points.)
...Are they angsty? (3 more points.)
...Do they have less weaknesses than is traditional? (ex. not averse to garlic, cannot be harmed by silver) (2 more points per weakness removed.)
...Do they have more powers than is traditional? (3 more points per added ability.)
...Are they a 'good' vampire? (2 more points.)

No fucking vampires

55) Is the character tough, physically, emotionally, and/or mentally? (1 point.)
...Are space marines wimpy compared to this character? (2 more points.)
...Is the toughness only stated, but never actually shown? (4 more points.)

Ainger: + 34
Freeman: +20 
Syd: + 12
Bluegill: +14 
Flint: + 28 
Loraine: +11 (Towards the end

56) Do they regularly receive new skills or weapons? (3 points.)

Not really

57) Do they master any skills in an improbably quick amount of time? (ex. becoming fluent in a language in a few weeks, mastering a type of magic within a few months where it usually takes years, etc.) (3 points.)

Noep

58) About weapons, can they use any? (1 point per weapon. Ignore if the character in question is with a military or paramilitary organization and this is included in the standard training package. Take points for non-standard weapons.)
...Do they tend to carry an arsenal along with them? (2 points.)
...Even when it's inappropriate to do so? (2 more points.)
...Do they carry a weapon that is inappropriate for the surroundings? (ex. a broadsword in WWII era, etc.) (4 points.)

This is kind of normal though, for a fcking apocalypse

59) Does the character look younger than they are? (1 point.)
...Significantly younger? (2 points; 1 if they use potions/suck life force/etc to remain young)
...Are they an immortal? (3 points.)
...Or is there no explanation for this at all, apart from a desire to keep the character young and pretty? (5 points.)

Hope

60) Is the character liked by the whole cast? (5 points)

Nope

61) Are the character's observations consistent with objective reality? (5 points)

Nope


Section III: Flaws and De-Suifiers

1) Does the character have honest-to-goodness acknowledged faults that aren't small, insignificant, or innocuous? (ex. greedy, weak-willed, sickly) (-3 points.)
...Do these faults have some bearing on the plot, as opposed to just being there for kicks and giggles? (-1 more point.)

Ainger: + 30 (There you go, my sweet baby XD
Freeman: +16 
Syd: + 9
Bluegill: +11 
Flint: + 28
Loraine: +8 

2) When the character gets themself out of trouble, is it through hard work and perseverance, rather than blind luck? (-1 point.)
...Is it at a high cost? (ex. losing a useful item in the process, a limb, or something else significant.) (-2 more points.)

Ainger: + 27
Freeman: +13
Syd: + 8
Bluegill: +8 
Flint: + 25
Loraine: +5 

3) Does the character have some physical aspect that actually does detract from their appearance, such as a nasty scar, beer belly, etc? (-1 point.)
...What about their voice? Do they sound raspy/whiny/unpleasant/etc? (-1 point.)
...Do they have gross habits or manners that are off-putting? (ex. picking their nose, spitting) (-1 point.)

Ainger: + 26
Freeman: +12
Syd: + 7
Bluegill: +7 
Flint: + 25
Loraine: +5 


4) Does the character look older than they are, if they are about 30 years old or more? (-1 point.)
...Have they aged badly? Have the years not been kind to them? (-1 point.)

Ainger: + 26
Freeman: +12
Syd: + 7
Bluegill: + 6 (poor blue XD
Flint: + 25
Loraine: +5

5) If the character is not human, do they react or think in distinctly non-human ways? (-2 points.)

Nah

6) Do they have or did they have any significant problems or failings that they could have prevented but didn't? (ex. They dropped out of university for letting their grades slide too much.) (-3 points.)

Not really 

7) Are they especially bad at any practical or useful skills, such as cooking, sewing, driving, etc? (-1 point per skill.)

Ainger: + 25 (Making fire with two sticks like freeman? XD
Freeman: +12
Syd: + 7
Bluegill: + 6 
Flint: + 25
Loraine: +5

8) Are they illiterate, in a society where literacy is expected? (-4 points.)

Nope

9) If they are a villain, do they have a code of honour or personal credo that they follow no matter what? (ex. an imperial officer who insists on treating prisoners decently, or who always makes sure there are no civilian casualties.) (-3 points.)
...Even if they know that the heroes can exploit it? (-4 points.)

Nooooo

10) Is the character disabled, physically or mentally, and does not have something to make up for it? (-4 points.)
...Is the character blind, mute, or deaf? (-3 points for each.)

Nope, those people die pretty fast.

11) Has the character ever made a bad decision? (-1 point if minor, -4 points if it's a major, life-changing decision. -2 points if it's something that made a lot of trouble or hardship for them for any decent length of time.)

WOW NO SHIT

Ainger: + 24
Freeman: +11
Syd: + 6
Bluegill: + 5 
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +4

12) Does the character have an inflated self-image, and honestly sees themself as being much better at a skill than they are? (-2 points.)

Ainger: + 24
Freeman: +11
Syd: + 4 (Dammit Syd
Bluegill: + 5 
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +4

13) Is the character very shy? (-1 point)
...Do they come off as cold, even if they don't mean to be? (-1 point.)
...Are they not skilled at making friends or getting close to others? (-1 point.)
...Or do they tend to put reserved people off by being too familiar too quickly? (-2 points.)
...Does the character get lonely easily? (-1 point.)

Ainger: + 21
Freeman: +10.5 (Shy in the beginning
Syd: + 3
Bluegill: + 2 
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +4

14) Have the character's principles ever created major trouble for them? (ex. Eddard Stark's devotion to honour and unwillingness to betray his principles was his downfall.) (-2 points.)

Nope

15) Does the character... (-1 point for each.)
...Dress badly? (mismatched colours, ill-fitting, ugly print dresses, etc.)
...Apply their makeup badly, if they wear it?
...Get called out on wearing skimpy or inappropriate clothing for their situation?

Nobody gives a shit in an apocalypse

16) Is the character honestly ugly or unattractive, whether it's their looks or their personality? (-2 points.)
...If the character is unnaturally beautiful, are they perceived as such and are considered scary or repulsive because if it? (-1 point.)

Ainger: + 19
Freeman: +8.5 
Syd: + 1
Bluegill: + 0
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +4

17) Was the character involved in some scandal that damaged their reputation and/or integrity? (-2 points.)

Nope

18) Is the character impotent or sterile? (-4 points.)
...If sterile, is it by their own choice? (-1 point instead.)
...Does this impotency or sterility cause them problems and/or pain? (-2 more points.)

Nope

19) Is the character a slob that would make a monkey blush? Or, are they a neat freak that simply must have things just so? (-1 point.)

Ainger: + 19
Freeman: +8.5 
Syd: + 0 (slob XD
Bluegill: + 0
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +4

20) Is the character incompetent or below-average in their job/profession/field? (-3 points.)

Nope

21) Does the character have a potentially damaging or debilitating habit? (ex. smoking, heavy drinking.) (-2 points per habit. Ignore if their habit is 'cool' and they don't suffer any side-effects for it.)

Ainger: + 19
Freeman: +8.5 
Syd: + -4 (drinking, smoking.....cannibalism...XD
Bluegill: + -4 (Drinking, smoking, being a douche
Flint: + 24
Loraine: +4

22) Does the character have any phobias? (not just fear of something; it has to be crippling) (-1 point.)
...Do they play an important part in the plot? (-2 points.)

Nope

23) Does the character have a fixation/obsession with something? (-1 point.)
...Does it interfere with their day-to-day life? (-2 points.)

Nope

24) Are they an older person, and feeling their age? (-1 point.)

Not really

25) If they've got great skills in something (ex. martial arts, archaeology), is it because they've spent years training or studying to get to where they are? (-2 points.)

Ainger: + 17
Freeman: +6.5 
Syd: + -6
Bluegill: + -6
Flint: + 22
Loraine: +4

26) Do they get a tragic or very unhappy ending? (-3 points.)

Ainger: + 14
Freeman: +3.5 
Syd: + -9
Bluegill: + -6
Flint: + 22
Loraine: +1

27) Do they exhibit traits which do interfere with their calling? (ex. a callous paladin, a forgetful mage) (-1 point.)

Nope

28) Is the character naive, gullible, or easily taken advantage of? (-1 point.)
...And do they get taken advantage of? (-1 more point per instance.)

Not really

29) If the character is a vampire...
...Are they a repulsive Nosferatu-type? (-2 points.)
...Are they bestial and vicious, instead of the more suave, attractive type? (-2 points.)

Nope

30) Does the character work hard for the money/job/rank/etc that they have? (-1 point.)

Ainger: + 14
Freeman: +3.5 
Syd: + -10
Bluegill: + -6
Flint: + 22
Loraine: +1

31) If the character is high-ranking, do they ever feel under a lot of pressure from their job/chain of command? (-2 points.)

Ainger: + 14
Freeman: +3.5 
Syd: + -12 (If he doesn't win fights he dies.
Bluegill: + -6
Flint: + 22
Loraine: +1

FINAL SCORE

Ainger: + 14 - 0-15: Doing fine; this character is balanced and believable, without any/many overwhelming Sue qualities. Good job! (Nice! *Highfives Ainger :D*
Freeman: +3.5 0-15: Doing fine; this character is balanced and believable, without any/many overwhelming Sue qualities. Good job! (*Highfives Freeman* :D
Syd: + -12 0-15: Doing fine; this character is balanced and believable, without any/many overwhelming Sue qualities. Good job! (Syd I still hate you, Syd: :noes:
Bluegill: + -6 0-15: Doing fine; this character is balanced and believable, without any/many overwhelming Sue qualities. Good job! *Highfives Blue* *Misses* *Slaps him in the face*
Flint: + 22 - 15-25: This character is acceptable, but not humble. (DAMN STRAIGHT *Highfives Flint
Loraine: +1 0-15: Doing fine; this character is balanced and believable, without any/many overwhelming Sue qualities. Good job! *Hugs Loraine*
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BANDS THAT DON'T SUCK (alphabetical order)

Tool - Hands down. - Tool Stamp by PockyPerson32 Tool Stamp by josephhaubert Toolband stamp by PsyLady
A perfect Circle - Mer De Noms Stamp by IgnisAlatus Thirteenth Step Stamp by IgnisAlatus A Perfect Circle by ovstamps A Perfect Circle by darkdisciple-stamps
AC/DC - AC DC Stamp by silva17 AC-DC Animated Stamp 1 by dA--bogeyman AC-DC Animated Stamp 9 by dA--bogeyman
Apocalyptica - Apocalyptica by skinnyveestamp
Astral projection - (No stamps :noes:
AudioSlave - Audioslave Stamp by darkdisciple-stamps
Battlecross - (no stamps :saddummy:
Bob Marley - bob marley by FediniSTAMPpage Bob Marley stamp by 5-3-10-4 Bob Marley stamp by CosmoAlien
Breaking Benjamin - Breaking Benjamin - Stamp by BreakingSasuke Breaking Benjamin Stamp by LuxDani Breaking Benjamin Stamp by EbonyKitE
Black label society - Black Label Society stamp by krassrocks
Cake - CAKE stamp by iFoxeh Cake Stamp by Slovman
Carcass - Carcass Stamp by DeFutura
Chevelle - chevelle stamp by josephhaubert Chevelle Stamp by IgnisAlatus
Dave Matthhews band - BLAG STAMP - BP Don't Drink by Ionosphere-Negate
Deftones - deftones - Stamp by Stamp-AG 'Deftones' Stamp 2 by iReallyWish 'Deftones' Stamp by iReallyWish
Dethklok - Dethklok stamp by Ravenfire5 -Dethklok Stamp- by whiterecycled-punk Metalocalypse Stamp I by darkdisciple-stamps
Die Antwoord - Die Antwoord by BoneSwag I Fink You Freeky by BoneSwag Pretty Wise by BoneSwag
Dio - Dio Stamp by mori-the-bat Ronnie James DIO by amordragon
Disturbed - Disturbed Stamp by Kezzi-Rose, disturbed fan 2 by DeviantSith, Disturbed Stamp by MajinPat
Dope - Dope - American Apathy (stamp) by HermesArtwork
Down - (No stamps ! :noes:
Elena Seigman - Elena Siegman by Plaguerat-Muffin
Everlast - What It's Like Everlast Stamp by Mercy-Waters,
Faith no more - Faith No More Stamp by WNoisePollution
Feared - (No stamps :noes:
Fear Factory - Fear Factory Stamp by Zap1992
ForTiori - (No stamps :noes:
Flightrisk (my cousin's band)
Flyleaf - Flyleaf by winter-ame Flyleaf by vintage-cowbells Flyleaf Stamp by JoleneyBeeny
Flunk - (;n; stampless
Garbage - Garbage Stamp by deadspaceheart
God is an astronaut - God Is An Astronaut Stamp by stamps-club
Godsmack - Godsmack Stamp by darkdisciple-stamps Godsmack stamp by LordPendragonOfCaria Godsmack Stamp by MajinPat
Green Day - Green Day 21stCB Stamp by Giga-man Green Day Stamp by darkdisciple-stamps I love Green Day by Azarin
Huntress - (*Despressingly empty*
I the breather - (still no stamps
In Flames - In Flames Stamp by toslayadragon
Isis - (seriously? No stamps for the doom metal?
Jeff Loomis - Nevermore - Stamp by anikasgubim
Johnny Cash - Stamp Heroes - Johnny Cash by lonesomeaesthetic Johhny Cash Stamp by ShipwreckedStamps Johnny Cash - Hurt Stamp by Raephen
Kittie - Kittie Stamp by Lalagirlinlalaland Kittie Stamp by PlagueRat-KittenKittie Stamp 2 by Lalagirlinlalaland
Killswitch engage - Killswitch Engage Stamp by Kezzi-Rose Killswitch Engage Stamp by NanaPHOTOGRAPHY - KillSwitch Engage stamp - by slawomiro Killswitch Engage Lyric Stamp by RaptureCyner
Korn - Korn by Wearwolfaa KoRn stamp 5 by gothicmermaid13 Korn Stamp by Scott347scott
Lamb of God - Lamb Of God by ovstamps Lamb Of God Fan Stamp by Silver-Dew-Drop Lamb of God by freakenstein1313
Led Zeppelin - Led Zepplin Stamp by Booya22
Limp bizkit - LB Stamp by BlackShaggy Limp Bizkit stamp by Tripp-X-Foxx The Unquestionable Truth Stamp by DarkRed27
Linkin Park - Linkin Park Stamp by Sora05 linkin park 2 by otakulottie Linkin Park Stamp by ZeKRoBzS
Marinade - (no stamps ;3;)
Marilyn Manson - Marilyn Manson stamp by sequelle Marilyn Manson 2 by HappyStamp marilyn002 by taintedstamps
Megadeth - Megadeth Stamp by Kezzi-Rose Megadeth stamp by LordPendragonOfCaria Megadeth Stamp by MegadethStamp2plz
Metallica - .:Stamp: :Metallica:. by TehOnism Metallica by nostu Metallica Stamp by drDIGITALhamodi
Michael Jackson - Michael Jackson Legend Stamp by dA--bogeyman Michael Jackson Video Stamp 1 by dA--bogeyman R.I.P Michael Jackson stamp by Strange-little-cat
Mushroom head - Metal
Neaera - death metal
Nirvana - grunge & rock
Nightshadow - Metal
Nomad - Rap & hip-hop
OTEP - Metal
Pantera - Metal
Periphery-Metal
Protest the hero-Metal
Phutureprimative - Electronic
Puscifer - Industrial
Rage against the machine -
Red hot chili peppers - Red Hot Chili Peppers Stamp by rlhcreations
Saliva - Rock/metal
Sevendust - Metal
Shades of black - Djent Metal
Shpongle - Electronica
Slayer - Metal
Slipknot - Metal
Skrillex - Techno / dance
Smashing Pumpkins - Alternative rock
Static X - Static-X Stamp by SakuraStars
Stone Sour - Metal
System of a down - Metal
t.A.T.u ~ notsosure
The Beatles - Rock
The Dillinger escape plan - Death Metal
The safety fire - Metal
The prodigy - Electronic
Thirty seconds to mars - rock
Today I caught the plague-Metal
Tool - Metal
Van Halen - Rock
Weird al - Weirdness
White Zombie - Metal
Yeah yeah yeah's - Rock

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DemonFox9Tails Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey!!! Thanks a ton for the fave on dark queen! I'm so glad you liked it!
You have amazing work. : D
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WarriorCheetah Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Student General Artist
Hey no problem :D I like your art style a lot, and your coloring job was fantastic :D

And thank you! I really appreciate that :D
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asher-050100 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for the watch! :happybounce: Here's a watch for you in return. :iconwristwatchplz:
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WarriorCheetah Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student General Artist
Haha, No problem! :D 

And bruh, thank you so much, I totally needed one of those :icontheyfoundmeplz: XD
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Xenotoonz9f Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Student Artist
Thanks; you've got some cool stuff yourself ;) 
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WarriorCheetah Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student General Artist
oh, well wai thank you ;3
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AudeS Featured By Owner Edited Jul 22, 2015
Thank you very much for adding me on your watchlist.

Edit: Um, my bad, I didn't look right...
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WarriorCheetah Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student General Artist
haha, I see no reason not watch you though :D
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AudeS Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Well, in that case I thanked you in advance I gues.*laughs*
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WarriorCheetah Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student General Artist
Haha, and I thank you as well good sir! :D
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